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I really, really like Alive and Unspoiled. Though it reminds me of something in LOTR. Wasn't that the command Saruman gave to Lurtz when they were sent to go get the hobbits. Ha, Ha, Ha, The irony is almost funny. (ILSH) Anyway I might just do AaU without the Forest. I might take some of the ideas from both and make my own book.
I really wish I didn't have school to do then I could work on all the great story ideas you have. See ya' Sunday!

FP

P.S. Did you hack my e-mail? That's okay if you did but I would prefer if I just posted the info on this blog.

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You truly are a story factory!  I wish I could spend all my time writing so that I could use those ideas.  I like Sacrifice but not AOB.  Just got back from the Hills yesterday.  going to the Comeaux's tonight for dinner.  I think I might do Sacrifice.
I started writing the first chapter of the Forest just to get something down.  I am beginning to outline.  2020 is on hold since I have the beginning and end nicely hammered out but not the middle.

See you Sunday!

FP 

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I regret to say that last night I threw up majorly!  I probably won't come to church so please send chapter 13. 
How do you like the new templates for all three blogs.  Its called blogger draft.  DO NOT TRY TO CHANGE ANY THING ON THE TEMPLATE!  If you have a problem with the template for MM please tell me and I will change it. 
Moving on to your comments,  I am very glad you did not overload me.  I must say you are very cruel to Ethan but make sure you also give him up to chapter 11 next.  I figured out the Bourne theme song I have no notes for it.  Nice synopsis for BE.  Thank you very much for the stories.  Try to give me another series and a couple regular novels.
Thank you for telling me about 's35johnmark'.  I saw that on my email and began to freak out.  I thought someone had hacked my account. 

See you sometime over the rainbow
FP

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Only one thing please resend the second part of the MM's mini series I accidentally deleted it.

Thanks
FP

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Okay I need you guys to do a couple of things. One look at the new improved version of our blog. Is their anything you want to add(pictures, poles, links, lists, ect)? I just need a welcome message. You may be thinking that I am just asking you since I'm a lazy bum but really I stink at writing greeting messages. They sound VERY cheesy. I hope you like the new blog layout.
About the OYAN can I borrow the textbook? I can not watch the video lessons. I am right now on lesson 7. When do I start writing?
For 2020 I am using another method. Its called the snowflake method. My dad found it and gave it to me. I am going to see how it works. Would you like a copy?
I am very busy right now I have three different parties to go to in one weekend, then the next weekend I'm going camping. I will try my hardest to at least get you a chapter of something. Be prepared, though that it might be awhile. It really depends on when I can start writing my OYAN. It is different from the other things that I have been working on.
Oh and before I forget we need a group picture to put on the MM blog (that's if its okay with you and your parents).

Your aspiring author and filmmaker,
JFP

P.S. You sent me about 50 comments with linking posts.

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I think I should announce this now so get your defibrillators ready... My dad said that I can use the OYAN curriculum as part of my School!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):):) I started Monday and I was wondering if I could borrow the textbook for a week or two. I will be mainly working on that book. I will not give out anything yet since the storyline is still being worked out. For the record it is NOT a family integrated end of the world type of book.
Moving on now, before though you do my book's I would like to see your work first. If it is worthy you shall do my book.
I will try my hardest to get some of my book which is for now titled Intent to Kill. Most likely though it will not happen. :(
Cheerio,

FP

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I am starting fresh! So any questions I miss you can bring them up again.
By the way that synopsis you wrote it sounds like a cheesy TV commercial. (No Offense)
Nice job on finishing the front room.
Awesome job on the title page I CANNOT WAIT to read it!
It is a MAJOR bummer about me getting the next chapter!
Hurry up Jimmy! I don't care if you starve just get me more of your book!
I'll meet Julie Sunday unless I'm stricken by the plague!

FP

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Sorry this is late but anyways,
Good job on the book!
Your mom may have told you but we had dinner at the Swanson's. HA!
And yes I said that.
Much better ending your a lucky dog that I'm not at your house. Because you would no longer be able to walk.
On LBG that is AWESOME!
I don't like the title that you gave my book but the synopsis is better. I will begin when I get back.
You NG you don't know what is a Jauggernaut you are a NG to the max!
I will try to answer your questions later now I'm off to beat Jonathan in pool since he beat me up last night.

FP

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Okay first I was the awesome person who said the quote.
By the way sorry about the last post it was supposed to come sooner.
Second, about the MM blog I am not much of a person to write on some thing like that.
That's too bad I'll miss her. Hopefully they'll come again while I'm not their.
Its great that your about to write one of your The Ends. I can't say that I've had the pleasure since I haven't ever capped off a great story yet. Come to think of it I haven't had a great book with a storyline started and now into. Oh well just need to put the thinking cap on.
Also about the MM blog. How about you write a post then send it to me and then I'll post it since your so stingy about persona; info and I'm a little careless at times.

By the way here is sort off brief Synopsis of my RM slight rip off(It is set about 30-50 years in the future).

Zach Beaslin was just a normal sort of guy that was on a trip to Europe with his parents and other families when the entire world is thrown into complete and utter confusion and turmoil. The Muslim's, who had been building up and out populating most of the Eroupean countries rise up and under a new form of Jihad start to take over Europe, Africa, and Asia. Caught in Europe when the disaster strikes and with the swarms of Muslims shutting down all means of escape for them. Then after banding with some french miliatary in the depths of the Ardennes they now try to strike back. But to win they must attack through hundred's of thousands of Muslim troops armed with a new kind of armour and better guns and get to a old castle where they must kill the leaders that are meeting their for a summit. If they are killed the Muslim Juggernaut will slow to a grinding halt and then they may have a chance at victory.

It doesn't have a good name yet.

FP

P.S. check the MM blog :)

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I just recieved you comments. You will be happy to know that I just posted.
Okay first I do believe you are a great writer of suspense. You keep me on my toes. Maybe it is because I only get a chapter a week and you leave them with such suspense!!! And if you value your legs and walking all you do with you legs then GET ME CHAPTER 11 NG.
You only plan to write three RM's is that correct?
And Lord Montaugue is actually Lord Revir right?
And Eddy I'm guessing has adventures in the new world?
I cannot think of who was like the SE charcters. Give me a hint, it's been a long time.
Don't tell me what I asked.
Chapter 16's ending yes did have a dorky ending.
RM three if it has no plot will be kind of boring. See if you can think of a plot.
About Music for WID I: will focus on the poor chap music. How long does it have to be. And for clarity can I have a copy of the movie with no voices. It would help me a lot to compose for it. I give Ethan all the other scenes to compose music for, for now at least.
By the way their name is the Sakoi's.
Also you can still comment and I will try to find time to answer them on my dad's laptop so keep up the comments.

FP

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You will be glad to know that I eliminated ALL adds on my blog. I haven't posted because I have been very,very, busy. I will try to post today.
I must admit something, though, I read chapter 16. I'm sorry I just couldn't resist. It really gave me nothing but I still read it. And I read it before I saw your comment on not reading it. I did not edit it at all.
About the poll. I shortened the poll since I cannot edit it while it is in progress so it will end soon and I will change it.
By the way you asked if I could see the Hill's friends in Colorado. Here the shocker, were staying with them at their house! :)
My Lego's did come back intact. Thank you.
Okay about the synopsis of your book. I am going to stab your legs until you cant even walk!!!!!!!!!
It though does kind of raise some key questions and also answers questions. It raises the question, What happens to the Duke? Is he dead or is he in hiding? It answers the question does Edmund escape from the noose. The Saint Brenden thing though it sounds so National Treasure. The series starts out with a simple farm guy. And now he's sailing off to fight Vikings and sea monsters(which I hope you keep biblical). Still, WHAT IS THE FORGOTTEN BLADE NG!!!
By the way how is the story of Saint Brenden and the throne of Tarlaan interconnected and why is Eddy wanting a throne?
One last thing do you o great and powerful writer of suspense, plan to write Revir Moon 3?

FP

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Sorry I wasn't their today (Sunday) I was REALLY SICK on Saturday and I am still slightly today. But anyways I hope you got to see the end of the gold medal U.S. vs. Canada Olympic Hockey game. It went into overtime and Canada won 3-2. But anyways I have a major question. Why in the name of Sam Hill did you bring me chapter 16! I will not edit it until you tell me why.
I have another question that is probably bigger. What did Mr. Romer say?
On your book. I cannot wait to start reading Revir Moon 2. That sounds like an enormous prologue. And what is the forgotten blade? I am anxious to know. I am though not going to see you this Sunday. For me, Allison, and my parents are flying up to Colorado on Thursday and will be coming back late Sunday.
About my Revir Moon rip off. I probably shouldn't call it that for their are only a few aspects of it are similar to your book. I'm still working out who the villain will be but I hope to give you a synopsis when I get back from my vacation. I will still be in touch since my dad is bringing his laptop.
And lastly about the adds I wasn't really making any money of of em' so it wasn't really a loss.

Your friend,
FP

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Sorry I have not posted in a while life has just been busy! Alright in this first negative speech I will be going down the flow and addressing some of the things that my opponent has brought up. Whoops sorry just a little bit of the speech tournament that was hanging over. Anyways... About the adds I think I will take them off because I cannot control what they put on since they only scan for words and not what their context is. I will post on the MM blog as soon as you can give me something to post about. If you would like access to the blog to post how you want I can give you the password and such. By the way I do make good on my threats (If you MFP do not know what I am talking about look on the last page of your newly edited book). I know you will laugh but I am thinking up a new book. It will be similar to Revir Moon and yes I know its Revere moon you will probably see the similarities but they are not to close but it is similar that sentence was probably full of bad grammar, but anyways it will be about 40-50 years in the future the book that is. I hope to give you the prologue and chapters 1,2 soon.
Its too bad you weren't their last night I hope to see you Sunday for if not then it will be two weeks before I see you again. Unless you throw a welcome home party for us.

Sorry this has been so late,

FP

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About people hitting the next button. Their are hundreds of thousands of blogs possibly more. Os I still think its safe and if someone found us its not like were giving out email addresses and we use so many abbreviations I don't see how its so dangerous and if someone did then I can delete the blog off the face of the Internet.

I will stop changing my blogs template since you say its annoying. I will give you Chap. 1 and 2 of Turmoil tonight.

See ya then!

FP

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I decided to continue to post the answers because only you look at this blog. In fact if you google my site name or things about it you have to go to the millionth page to find it.
To answer FFP, yes you can delete posts and comments. Yes I don't like Sheave at all! His turnabout will be tough to do because by then your readers will HATE HIM TO THE DEATH!!!!!!!!
I will be interested to see how you do it. It will also be interesting to see how Sheave is so important.

I will bring for certain the first chapter of Turmoil maybe the second. And you will bring at least Chapter 9. I will finally see Guy Foxe. :):):):)

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FP

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Thank you for all the comments. MFP please send me the video again because it either didn't go through or you didn't send it. Please send it again and I will post it on MM blog.
I also hope we save this book more than SE. (It's getting hilarious on how many abbreviations we use):).
Thank you FFP for finally getting me your book. Right now I will get you chapter one of Turmoil. I might have Chapter one of 2020 ready but its only slightly possible. Please send me that video ASAP.
By the way about your book. I will have edited chapters 3,5,7,8, and 0the Prologue. I shredded up chapter 7 pretty bad. I also have a suggestion for your book FFP I suggest that sometime in book two that you kill off Augustine. This is out of no ill will towards him just that it would make the hero's plight sink very low and for me I like it when good characters die. Its makes the book more real. Now I'd also like sheave to get chopped up into small bits. Don't try to make him do a 180 I want him to die, die, die. :)

FP

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Okay thank you very much! I will tell you all the original ideas and things about my book that I had had in mind and we can talk about how we can redirect it to make it better. For now I'll just stop fixing the edits and work on Turmoil or 2020. Hopefully I can get you chapter 1 of both.
I had a small question about one of your comments. You asked how I liked the movie. What movie are you talking about? Winston Churchill or our movie. if the latter then I should tell you that I haven't got it yet so if you are in the process of emailing it then I'll wait but if not I'll see if my mom got it and just hasn't told me yet.
About music for the movie. I will probably do best for the 'poor chap' music and since I think you told me that Ethan had a good heroic theme music so I'll just work on the 'poor chap' music.
I look forward to seeing you tomorrow.

FP

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I decided that I will post my answer to you MFP (Male FP). By the way you gave me page one of chapter nine. I have almost finished shredding chapter eight of your book. I am REALLY enjoying it. I will see you on Wednesday. I finished fixing my errors up to chapter three in my book and hopefully I can give it back on Wednesday for another round of shreds. I know that I got a little carried away on the prologue. I was listening to dark and morbid music and I was just in the mood so to say. I can't believe how bad that was!!! But anyways... Thank you for finally getting to chapter 9 so I can finally see what Guy Foxe does. Although he is an image of myself so I'll be seeing how good you portray me. :)
About my birthday, yes I plan on having a small party similar to last year. (But maybe with out all the soda Ha, ha, ha) What would I want? If money is no object. then its the medieval market set an apple 17" laptop, or a the imperial flagship. But to come closer to earth, I would like maybe the Game Axis and Allies, the newest version. (which by the way has cruisers and a different battle number system.) or Axis and Allies Europe. Also a Lego gift card or a gift card to itunes, Barnes and Nobles, Amazon, Ebay, or Target all work.

But about other things. That is great about the movie but does this mean that we have to redo the lines? Not that it would be to much trouble but do we need to do it? I'm also thinking about my book. I might ditch it. I can hear your gasps:). But I might because it is a book that has no real outline so maybe you can help me with the storyline and help me restart it. It is right now going to flow eventually. However if you two could help me then it might work. Its okay if you cant quite do now but i would like some help with it. I know I probably sound desperate but I need some help directing it because I am not to good with saving books out of the mud. I will repeat that if you do not wish to that will be fine I will just pick up another.

Your humble editor, and Wanna-be writer,
FP