FOR MFP AND FFP

Sorry I wasn't their today (Sunday) I was REALLY SICK on Saturday and I am still slightly today. But anyways I hope you got to see the end of the gold medal U.S. vs. Canada Olympic Hockey game. It went into overtime and Canada won 3-2. But anyways I have a major question. Why in the name of Sam Hill did you bring me chapter 16! I will not edit it until you tell me why.
I have another question that is probably bigger. What did Mr. Romer say?
On your book. I cannot wait to start reading Revir Moon 2. That sounds like an enormous prologue. And what is the forgotten blade? I am anxious to know. I am though not going to see you this Sunday. For me, Allison, and my parents are flying up to Colorado on Thursday and will be coming back late Sunday.
About my Revir Moon rip off. I probably shouldn't call it that for their are only a few aspects of it are similar to your book. I'm still working out who the villain will be but I hope to give you a synopsis when I get back from my vacation. I will still be in touch since my dad is bringing his laptop.
And lastly about the adds I wasn't really making any money of of em' so it wasn't really a loss.

Your friend,
FP

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Sorry I have not posted in a while life has just been busy! Alright in this first negative speech I will be going down the flow and addressing some of the things that my opponent has brought up. Whoops sorry just a little bit of the speech tournament that was hanging over. Anyways... About the adds I think I will take them off because I cannot control what they put on since they only scan for words and not what their context is. I will post on the MM blog as soon as you can give me something to post about. If you would like access to the blog to post how you want I can give you the password and such. By the way I do make good on my threats (If you MFP do not know what I am talking about look on the last page of your newly edited book). I know you will laugh but I am thinking up a new book. It will be similar to Revir Moon and yes I know its Revere moon you will probably see the similarities but they are not to close but it is similar that sentence was probably full of bad grammar, but anyways it will be about 40-50 years in the future the book that is. I hope to give you the prologue and chapters 1,2 soon.
Its too bad you weren't their last night I hope to see you Sunday for if not then it will be two weeks before I see you again. Unless you throw a welcome home party for us.

Sorry this has been so late,

FP

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About people hitting the next button. Their are hundreds of thousands of blogs possibly more. Os I still think its safe and if someone found us its not like were giving out email addresses and we use so many abbreviations I don't see how its so dangerous and if someone did then I can delete the blog off the face of the Internet.

I will stop changing my blogs template since you say its annoying. I will give you Chap. 1 and 2 of Turmoil tonight.

See ya then!

FP

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I decided to continue to post the answers because only you look at this blog. In fact if you google my site name or things about it you have to go to the millionth page to find it.
To answer FFP, yes you can delete posts and comments. Yes I don't like Sheave at all! His turnabout will be tough to do because by then your readers will HATE HIM TO THE DEATH!!!!!!!!
I will be interested to see how you do it. It will also be interesting to see how Sheave is so important.

I will bring for certain the first chapter of Turmoil maybe the second. And you will bring at least Chapter 9. I will finally see Guy Foxe. :):):):)

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FP

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Thank you for all the comments. MFP please send me the video again because it either didn't go through or you didn't send it. Please send it again and I will post it on MM blog.
I also hope we save this book more than SE. (It's getting hilarious on how many abbreviations we use):).
Thank you FFP for finally getting me your book. Right now I will get you chapter one of Turmoil. I might have Chapter one of 2020 ready but its only slightly possible. Please send me that video ASAP.
By the way about your book. I will have edited chapters 3,5,7,8, and 0the Prologue. I shredded up chapter 7 pretty bad. I also have a suggestion for your book FFP I suggest that sometime in book two that you kill off Augustine. This is out of no ill will towards him just that it would make the hero's plight sink very low and for me I like it when good characters die. Its makes the book more real. Now I'd also like sheave to get chopped up into small bits. Don't try to make him do a 180 I want him to die, die, die. :)

FP

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Okay thank you very much! I will tell you all the original ideas and things about my book that I had had in mind and we can talk about how we can redirect it to make it better. For now I'll just stop fixing the edits and work on Turmoil or 2020. Hopefully I can get you chapter 1 of both.
I had a small question about one of your comments. You asked how I liked the movie. What movie are you talking about? Winston Churchill or our movie. if the latter then I should tell you that I haven't got it yet so if you are in the process of emailing it then I'll wait but if not I'll see if my mom got it and just hasn't told me yet.
About music for the movie. I will probably do best for the 'poor chap' music and since I think you told me that Ethan had a good heroic theme music so I'll just work on the 'poor chap' music.
I look forward to seeing you tomorrow.

FP

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I decided that I will post my answer to you MFP (Male FP). By the way you gave me page one of chapter nine. I have almost finished shredding chapter eight of your book. I am REALLY enjoying it. I will see you on Wednesday. I finished fixing my errors up to chapter three in my book and hopefully I can give it back on Wednesday for another round of shreds. I know that I got a little carried away on the prologue. I was listening to dark and morbid music and I was just in the mood so to say. I can't believe how bad that was!!! But anyways... Thank you for finally getting to chapter 9 so I can finally see what Guy Foxe does. Although he is an image of myself so I'll be seeing how good you portray me. :)
About my birthday, yes I plan on having a small party similar to last year. (But maybe with out all the soda Ha, ha, ha) What would I want? If money is no object. then its the medieval market set an apple 17" laptop, or a the imperial flagship. But to come closer to earth, I would like maybe the Game Axis and Allies, the newest version. (which by the way has cruisers and a different battle number system.) or Axis and Allies Europe. Also a Lego gift card or a gift card to itunes, Barnes and Nobles, Amazon, Ebay, or Target all work.

But about other things. That is great about the movie but does this mean that we have to redo the lines? Not that it would be to much trouble but do we need to do it? I'm also thinking about my book. I might ditch it. I can hear your gasps:). But I might because it is a book that has no real outline so maybe you can help me with the storyline and help me restart it. It is right now going to flow eventually. However if you two could help me then it might work. Its okay if you cant quite do now but i would like some help with it. I know I probably sound desperate but I need some help directing it because I am not to good with saving books out of the mud. I will repeat that if you do not wish to that will be fine I will just pick up another.

Your humble editor, and Wanna-be writer,
FP